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Offline NewAgeOfPower

the title
« on: June 27, 2015, 04:41:34 pm »
I read it as Eyes of Pure Hatred.

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Offline Marx-93

Re: the title
« Reply #1 on: June 27, 2015, 04:50:52 pm »
I read it as Eyes of Pure Hatred.

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Wait, isn't that Chigaras true nature as an Arcadius puppet?

Joking aside (I bullied poor Chigara too much these past days, I'm soryyy), it's one of the dangers with tittles slightly long and involving words like: laughter, hearted, cook, etc
Why can only the evil have empires, power and majestic theme music? I reclaim the possibility of creating the Federal-democratic-free Empire! A (democratic) tyranny fueled by the Power of Love!

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Offline Whalecow

Re: the title
« Reply #2 on: June 28, 2015, 10:38:46 am »
I used google translate for it, and it read eyes of the pure hearted. The Japanese thing is only a side note, and probably won't end up in the game, so it doesn't matter so much.
Inwhaleably yours,
Whalecow

Offline Marx-93

Re: the title
« Reply #3 on: June 28, 2015, 06:39:14 am »
Whalecow, I don't think he meant an alternative reading for the Japanese tittle (by which we would need the kanji by the way, with romaji we can't do anything), but that is very easy to misread in English.
Why can only the evil have empires, power and majestic theme music? I reclaim the possibility of creating the Federal-democratic-free Empire! A (democratic) tyranny fueled by the Power of Love!

Started writing. You can check it out here: Home